- Steele in the Picture
Date: Sunday, October 14, 2001
- Michael Bledsoe <mpbledsoe@yahoo.com>
I would like to thank Debra for beta reading, I don't know how
I could get along without her! I would also like to thank everyone
at chat for their support and encouragement.
This story is set during the first season.
Steele in the Picture
By Michael Bledsoe mpbledsoe@yahoo.com
Garret Williams was dead and Remington Steele was enraged. Not
that Steele knew the unfortunate, and late, Mr. Williams or had
ever even met him, but the fact that he was dead impacted Steele
on several levels.
Laura Holt and Murphy Michaels sat in the rear of the limo and
chatted excitedly. They were in their element. Both had been
trained as detectives, fingerprints, bodily fluids and times
of death were all part and parcel of their trade. Not that they
were deliberately ignoring Steele, he just didn't exist in this
conversation. Steele's training had been different. His instincts
were different and dead bodies were not something that he could
take any pleasure in, particularly when he had been the discoverer
of the deceased. Steele tried to stifle an involuntary shudder,
but he was unable accomplish it.
Steele took the suit coat that was lying across his knees and
threw it on the floorboards of the limo. There was nothing on
it that he could see or smell, but somehow it seemed tainted.
He shuddered again as he recalled the feathery feeling of Williams'
pants brushing against his face. He pulled off his tie and it
quickly joined the coat on the floorboards.
The interior of the limo seemed stifling and Steele felt like
he couldn't catch a breath. Rolling up the sleeves on his shirt
and opening the collar button gave him some sense of relief,
but not enough. He rolled down the window, but the unseasonably
warm, February breeze that came through it was no help at all
so he rolled it back up.
"Fred, pull over!" he barked.
"Yes, sir," Fred answered. Ever the accomplished professional
in his field, he smoothly pulled the big Fleetwood limousine
over to the curb. Quickly he came around and opened Steele's
door.
"Fred, if they even ask, I've gone for a walk." Steele
said, noting the pair inside the vehicle had apparently not noticed
the limo stopping or his departure. It was just as he suspected,
they didn't even feel that he had opinions or insights of any
value.
"Yes, sir." Fred's gruff voice held some concern.
"I just need a walk to clear my head," Steele said
as he took a quick glance at his suit coat and tie then dismissed
them.
Fred closed the door cutting them off from view. "Very good,
Mister Steele. Should I pick you up somewhere after I drop them
off?" Fred cast a doubting eye over the neighborhood.
"Thank you, no. I'll find my own way home."
"Yes, sir."
Steele watched with a critical eye as Fred ran around to the
front of the big black limousine and jumped in. The big car paused
for a moment, its red brake lights reflecting off the 'RSTEELE'
vanity plate. Then it pulled out smoothly into traffic. Fred's
skill, talent and professionalism shone through every move of
the Cadillac. Envy reared its ugly green head, but Steele quickly
cut it off.
His piercing blue eyes seemed hooded as he started his body walking
down the street. As he walked, the memories of the past few hours
flooded in and swirled around his mind. He really didn't know
where he was, but at the moment it didn't matter.
It had seemed like such a simple job when Bernice had taken the
call. A family in Picayune, Mississippi needed the famous detective
Remington Steele to find their lost relative. They had not heard
from him in a couple of weeks and were worried. They wanted the
Steele Agency to find him and give them the particulars on Garret
Williams. Murphy had joyfully cried out, "Skip trace!"
and within moments the lost relative was lost no more.
Unfortunately, his phone had been disconnected, so it was decided
that a quick road trip was in order. Speedily, Fred had been
summoned and they had set out. Steele had tagged along, just
to irk Murphy. He really had no business on the ride, but then,
he didn't have much business to attend anyway. His winning streak
at the track had vanished and it was too early for a good card
game. Murphy had protested, but Laura had just raised her hands;
she did not want to hear them squabble again. Victory had brought
a smile to Steele's face while Murphy had frowned like a petulant
child.
Williams, it turned out, had a residence in a small Los Angeles
neighborhood. Fred had been forced to maneuver the big limousine
carefully down the narrow streets at a snail's pace. The houses
seemed to be only inches apart and most were built to the exact
same plan. The only differences seemed to be trim color and yard
statuary.
Since it was very early afternoon, there were exceptionally few
neighbors about. The trio strode up to the front door of Williams'
house and rang the bell. They could not hear it ring inside the
house and no answer was forthcoming, so Murphy pounded at the
door. While Steele glanced about pretending not to be with Murphy,
he noticed that the mailbox was overflowing and a utility notice
was hung over the doorknob.
Having pointed the notice out to Laura, he had stepped closer
to the door, blocking his hand movements with his body. Laura
had simply nodded as Murphy signaled Fred to move the limo. A
stretch limo in this neighborhood was hard to miss. Steele had
the door open in a moment and they quickly entered.
The smell of ruined food was overpowering. All of the windows
were tightly closed and the front room had been quite dark. It
did not have the normal appearance of a front room. There were
no couches or other comfortable furniture in the room, just metal
folding chairs. In the semidarkness, they noticed as they quickly
filed in that the walls were filled with shelves and the shelves
were filled to overflowing.
Steele, having opened the door, was the first in. As he hurriedly
pressed forward into the shelf crowded room, thereby allowing
entry by his two companions, he stumbled over something. There
was a shocking clatter as many objects struck the floor. He bent
down to determine what had fallen and Laura shoved up against
him from behind. Normally, this would have sent an electric thrill
through him, what with the close physical contact to her and
all, but now it just caused him to fall forward across the metal
folding chair and onto the still clattering objects. As his outstretched
hands came into contact with the things on the floor, he found
himself falling face first onto the shag carpet.
Murphy laughed out loud as Steele tried to sit up and bring a
handkerchief out of his breast pocket at the same time. Laura
hissed at them for silence and reached down to grab some of the
slippery items on the floor. Steele calmly accomplished his goals
of sitting up and claiming the handkerchief, which he hastily
held his over his nose. It didn't, however, seem to tame the
overpowering stench very much.
"Blue Suede Shoes. Great Balls of Fire. Blueberry Hill,"
Laura read out quietly. "This was a stack of 50s Rock n'
Roll 45s before Mister Steele shattered them." Her voice
held a smile, but Steele felt that she wasn't particularly droll
at the moment, not with him up to his arse in the bloody things.
"Astounding Science Fiction. Ellery Queen. American Magazine.
Analog," Murphy joined in. "Look at this -- TV
Guides from the fifties. It's a collectors paradise in here,
Laura."
Ignoring the other two, Steele had run his free hand through
the shag carpeting. It was worn, nearly threadbare. As his eyes
grew accustomed to the semidarkness, he noticed that the paint
on the walls and ceiling was thin and peeling.
"Has anyone noticed that there is a problem here?"
Steele asked.
"Damn it, Steele! How do you keep doing that?"
"Yes, Murphy, me boy. I may not be a trained detective,
but I have a practiced eye for value."
"Yes, they are collectors items, but the conditions are
poor," Laura said. "Really, they are not worth collecting
at all."
Laura evaluated the layout of the room. A narrow hall with several
doors leading out from it lay before her. She nodded to Murphy
and they headed in that direction. Steele, on the other hand,
was nearly sitting in a door less opening that lead to a kitchen.
"Mister Steele, if you would check out the kitchen."
"Thanks, Laura!" Steele muttered sotto voice. He rose
carefully from the floor and avoided the disks still strewn about
the floor as he stepped onto the linoleum from the carpet.
The kitchen was unsavory, but the light was somewhat better as
the Venetian blinds that covered the kitchen windows allowed
more sunlight to fill the room. The smell of rotted food was
nearly overpowering near the refrigerator. Steele wondered how
long the power had been off to produce such a smell. Not only
that, but the tiny room was nearly empty, with a single table
taking up most of the area. This had been the living area of
the house, he guessed. An open can of tomato soup, with a spoon
in it, sat there before a small television. The little black
and white set had rabbit-eared aerials rising above it, with
sections of aluminum foil on their ends. Behind the television
was an IBM Selectric with a sheet of paper still in it. On the
floor beside the typewriter were several crumpled up sheets of
paper. Near the edge of the table sat an opened box of Godiva
chocolates and its lid.
Steele wished for gloves as he walked around the table to the
typewriter. He noted that the candy box was empty; except for
the little papers the chocolates came in. Reeling the loaded
paper up, he noticed that one word had been typed: Ventura. Puzzled
he reached for one of the crumpled balls of paper. This appeared
to be a shopping list.
Confusion was starting to set in. Maybe his lack of training
was beginning to show, but he really didn't want to admit it.
He especially didn't want to admit it in front of Murphy Michaels.
Their rivalry and the one-upmanship that encompassed nearly every
action of the two of them came at a cost. The independent Steele
could not willingly ask for nor accept help from Murphy. They
were like two dogs growling over the same bone. He smiled ruefully,
realizing that was not a very flattering of Laura Holt; she would
be incensed if she heard it.
Across the tiny kitchen was another door. Steele stepped up to
this new door and discovered that it was locked. In for a pence,
in for a pound, he thought as he set to work on the lock. His
skill with lock picks swiftly gained him entry to a laundry room.
It was piled with clothes and not much else, but revealed another
door. This was quickly becoming a maze, Steele had thought. He
was reminded of the song House Of Four Doors from In
Search Of The Lost Chord by The Moody Blues, Decca Records,
1968. Humming quietly to himself he opened this final door.
Mystery spread its cloak
Across the sky,
We'd lost our way.
After leaving the relatively well-lit kitchen, the laundry room
was quite dark, so Steele left the door from the kitchen open
to shed some light on his search. But even more disturbing than
the dark was the incredible stench. There must have been a deep
freeze in the room, Steele reasoned, holding his handkerchief
tighter against his nose.
Steele advanced into the dark, still humming the Moody Blues.
He became aware that he was in a garage when he banged his shins
on a car. He had backed away and bent over to feel his hurting
legs. When he had drawn himself to his full height, he felt something
in his hair. Turning quickly, he found himself face-to-shin with
Garrett Williams. Needless to say, he wailed like a banshee.
Steele jumped back and immediately sprawled backward over the
bonnet of a small car. His head smacked down on the windscreen
and he had instantly saw stars.
His next conscious thought occurred a while later when Murphy
turned on the headlights of the car The intense light exposed
a portly man with a long, grey beard hanging from an exposed
beam by a green garden hose. The sight was not one that Steele
wanted burned into his retina, but the concentration of light
in the small garage combined with the blow to the base of his
skull seemed to burn the sight into his memory forever.
Steele called the police from the limo's mobile phone and a short
time later, they had efficiently determined that Williams had,
in fact, committed suicide. He had been down on his luck, behind
on his bills, and unwilling to part with his collection. It had
reminded Steele of himself in some of those dark days before
he had assumed the mantle of the Great Detective.
Great Detective, he mused-- what a crock! He had screamed like
a girl, he had lowered himself in the eyes of Laura. Not only
that, but he had been demeaned in front of Murphy Michaels. His
behavior had been ridiculous and it was damn nigh unforgivable.
That is, he could never forgive himself.
* * * * *
Steele came back to the present and found himself facing a picture
of Cary Grant and Ingrid Bergman. The poster hung in the window
of a rundown looking electronics store called Federal TV.
For the moment, the untimely death of Garrett Williams was temporally
banished and his doubts of his detective abilities were forgotten.
Might as well enjoy the moment, he thought as he entered the
dingy looking building.
The appearance inside negated the one presented from the outside.
The store was well lit and there were literally thousands of
video tape recorders, televisions and stereos. He found himself
drawn to a small alcove with a large screen television playing
Alfred Hitchcock's Notorious (1946). The image was so
clear and bright that he could hardly credit his eyes.
"Could I interest you in something, sir?" the polite
clerk inquired.
"Tell me about this," Steele said, waving his arm at
the picture.
"Ah, a man of discriminating taste," the clerk said
as he reached out and picked up a box that Steele hadn't noticed
sitting atop the wide screen television. "This is the Criterion
Collection of Alfred Hitchcock's Notorious on laser disk.
Not only is it a new transfer, but this great edition also contains
an audio commentary by film historian Rudy Behlmer."
"I've read about these laser disks. Are they really worth
the hype?"
"Sir, I guarantee it!" the clerk said enthusiastically.
"The magnetic particles on a video tape flake off every
time you pass it over the heads. With a laser disk there is no
physical contact with the program's data." He slid what
looked like an album sleeve out of the box and tilted it to reveal
the disk inside. The store lights caught the embedded data and
rainbows danced about in the darkened alcove. "Laser disks
should last forever, unless you take a nail to them."
Steele was dazzled. Perhaps this was just the ticket to banish
his doldrums.
"Could I interest you in one today?"
The day's events swirled around in his head again and Steele
shook his head, at once producing a sharp headache. "Not
today, I'm afraid," he said regretfully. "But could
you give me a card."
The clerk produced a card and Steele could see the light of a
commission fading in the man's eyes.
* * * * *
Still searching for solace, Steele once again found himself walking
down the sidewalk. Seeing the sign on a little donut shop, he
had a craving for hot cocoa. He entered the small bakery and
stepped up to a stool. An attractive young woman of apparently
Asian-Indian decent came up behind the counter and asked what
he would like.
"Hot cocoa," Steele replied.
"Yes, sir. Whipped cream or marshmallows?"
"Let's live dangerously, shall we? Whipped cream."
Soon a fair sized cup of cocoa covered with whipped cream and
a maraschino cherry appeared before him. As he sipped, his mind
ranged back over the past year that he had been Remington Steele.
Had it really been worth it? Perhaps he didn't have the detective
training of Laura and Murphy, but he had some other talents that
he could bring to bear.
He finished his cocoa, paid his bill, and stepped out into the
growing evening. His head still throbbed sharply, so he proceeded
across the street to a small convenience store. His eyes were
drawn to a small group of young boys in white outfits entering
a storefront. Glancing up, he noticed a huge neon fist blinking
the words, Shamblins' School of Karate. The fist amused
him and he chuckled for the first time in hours.
He watched as the young students shed their shoes and stepped
onto the mats of the dojo, their eyes gleaming with enthusiasm
as they faced their instructors. As he saw them bow and begin
the first kata, it filled him with hope. Not everyone followed
the same path; his lack of training was being filled. Even though
it was his name on the agency, he was serving an apprenticeship,
just as Laura and Murphy had at Havenhurst. Maybe he wouldn't
give up the life of Steele just yet.
He turned and entered the corner convenience store. Beside the
counter was a display of BC headache powders. As he grabbed a
packet and tossed it on the counter, something in the glass display
case caught his eye. Bending his knees, he took a closer look
into the Valentine's Day display. His laughter filled the small
shop and the old Korean woman at the register eyed him with suspicion,
but he couldn't help himself.
"I'll take this, also," he said, motioning to the black
teddy bear which was holding in its paws a red lace heart proclaiming
'I wuv U!'
"Twenty-nine ninety-five," the woman said, still watching
him carefully.
"Wonderful," he murmured as she took the black teddy
bear from the case.
Steele paid for his purchases and walked into the night. Being
Remington Steele could be difficult; it was a heavy mantle to
shoulder, but he would stick to it. If only he could forgive
himself for that unmanly shriek, then he might work up the courage
to give his black lace teddy to Laura for Valentine's Day.
* * * * *
For those of you trying to guess the Challenge Story Elements,
I added a few more items of my own to the story. I hope a few
of them kept you guessing.
1. A stack of 50s Rock n' Roll 45s
2. Whipped cream
3. A box of Godiva chocolates
4. A video of "Notorious"
5. A black lace teddy
6. Karate
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